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	<title>Comments on: In defense of Strunk and White: Beware&#8212;the passive voice can kill</title>
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		<title>By: Chris Au</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chris Au</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 14 May 2009 17:29:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Uh...didn&#039;t some people in Holland invent the English language?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Uh&#8230;didn&#8217;t some people in Holland invent the English language?</p>
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		<title>By: HeavyG</title>
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		<dc:creator>HeavyG</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Apr 2009 20:28:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;i&gt;&quot;Perhaps someday I’ll even go along with “ebook” rather than “e-book.&quot;&lt;/i&gt;

Well since the standard usage in the United Kingdom is &quot;email&quot; and &quot;ebook&quot; those are therefore the proper forms.

After all...they invented the English language. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><i>&#8220;Perhaps someday I’ll even go along with “ebook” rather than “e-book.&#8221;</i></p>
<p>Well since the standard usage in the United Kingdom is &#8220;email&#8221; and &#8220;ebook&#8221; those are therefore the proper forms.</p>
<p>After all&#8230;they invented the English language. <img src='http://www.teleread.org/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: David Rothman</title>
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		<dc:creator>David Rothman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Apr 2009 17:39:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Only partly a joke, alas. We probably don&#039;t know of all the fatalities associated with U.S. torture, or the memos associated with them. Torture does not just happen. It requires people--the &quot;I&#039;s&quot; the subjects. Ultimately, then, in this case, &quot;irony&quot; and &quot;at face value&quot; can blur.

In general, the use of the active voice &lt;em&gt;can&lt;/em&gt; make government and the military at least a little more responsible. Language reflects logic. I&#039;m not saying that the active voice is a panacea, but the encouragement of its use can help.

Thanks,
David</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Only partly a joke, alas. We probably don&#8217;t know of all the fatalities associated with U.S. torture, or the memos associated with them. Torture does not just happen. It requires people&#8211;the &#8220;I&#8217;s&#8221; the subjects. Ultimately, then, in this case, &#8220;irony&#8221; and &#8220;at face value&#8221; can blur.</p>
<p>In general, the use of the active voice <em>can</em> make government and the military at least a little more responsible. Language reflects logic. I&#8217;m not saying that the active voice is a panacea, but the encouragement of its use can help.</p>
<p>Thanks,<br />
David</p>
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		<title>By: dw</title>
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		<dc:creator>dw</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Apr 2009 15:25:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;i&gt;&quot;S&amp;W might actually have saved a few lives by reducing the use of torture, compared to what would have happened otherwise.&quot;&lt;/i&gt;

&lt;i&gt;Perhaps AIG could have stayed out of trouble if its people had rigorously followed the better rules in S&amp;W.&lt;/i&gt;

I presume this article is a joke -- although you might want to make your irony more explicit in future.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><i>&#8220;S&amp;W might actually have saved a few lives by reducing the use of torture, compared to what would have happened otherwise.&#8221;</i></p>
<p><i>Perhaps AIG could have stayed out of trouble if its people had rigorously followed the better rules in S&amp;W.</i></p>
<p>I presume this article is a joke &#8212; although you might want to make your irony more explicit in future.</p>
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